this is just what i have started plz i need somone to help me or give me suggestions on how to continue it
As I approached the big illuminated blue and red golden gate that read ‘peter pan’s fairytale resort’ my eyes wondered around the multitude of crowd and the feeling of excitement tingled in my unsettled stomach. I feel warmed by the direct rays of the sun and I would smell the sweet highly enjoyable breeze that swept to my direction, blowing my soft black curly hair to frenzy. I make my way to the ticket stall where a lot of people jostling and running hysterical, trying to get to the ticket stall first. I hear the ticket seller shouting obliviously at the crowd and there is a very silent yet tense atmosphere. The ticket seller was Ben Andrews has it was written boldly in his white and red-stripped uniform, he had a dirty evil scowl on his face that made me very intimidated and uncomfortable.
I notice a woman with bulging shopping bags trying clumsily to clean the ice cream residue on the shirt of her little boy, who was in no means ready to cooperate. I see three triplets dressed in identical blue Cinderella costumes and licking pink, sticky candyfloss as they danced and swirled energetically to the pop music that filled the air. Everything looks surreal and I could smell the scrumptious appetizing donuts and burgers that filed my inquisitive nostrils but that is however rudely disturbed my the appalling smell of murky stale milky chocolate vomits that spread across the pavement of the arcade I was heading to.
In arcade, there are lots of middle-aged tourists drinking large cans of alcohol, gambling with coin slots, playing pinballs and laughing to obscene jokes more to my discomfort. I caught a glance of a little girl holding tightly to the wrist of her hasty mother and concentrating on getting the last purple stuffed teddy bear left in the teddy bear crane machine. Her hair was bright with sunshine but her face, which was as full like her mother’s only pale rose pink instead of cream, wore a stern brooding look that her little small curved nose made almost hawk like. A moment later, she opened her eyes widely and her face lit up and I could see the huge grin plastered against her oval face as she hugged the purple teddy bear she wanted. “Yay! Mommy see I got it at the end!” the little girl said. “C’mon Gracie let get out of this place” the mother said grabbing Gracie. I watched them aimlessly as they disappeared into the massive crowd, shoving and striding in circles. I notice a tourist tossing greasy fried chips to the seagulls in the water park resort and I almost run into a jaywalking family slurping on soggy cones of thawing ice cream.
I ahead to the marigold ride when I am distracted by the big spooky Ghost train at the corner. I notice the painted ghouls and goblins of the Devil’s Ghost train which stands out against the crystal clear blue sky, promising to bring doom, dread and danger to all those who dare to enter.
PLZ ANYONE GIVE ME ANYMORE SUGGESTIONS
DE Tickets
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